I need correction made to a paper that was done by a tutor

I needed the red area cited or put in your own words and corrections made on the paper. I had a tutor to type it for me so, i dont know where the information came from. I sent in the paper to my professor as a rough draft and this is what she sent back. I have to turn the paper in before midnight.

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